IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6.5 (General Training)
6.5
Overall Score
26 Jul 24, 10:56
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the required points and maintains a formal tone. However, there are minor grammatical errors and some sentences could be more concise for better coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 6.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You want to know more about a volunteer program you saw advertised. Write a letter to the program coordinator to request more information.
Ask about the volunteer roles available
Inquire about the time commitment required
Request details about the application process
#Request for Information
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:282
Paragraphs:6
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Dear, (Program Coordinator)
Greetings, my name is Anabella Jennie Tannato
and
I'm
a student in my third year of high school. I hope you are doing well. I'm
addressing this letter to you to ask about the volunteer program
details. I came across the advertisement for the volunteer program
and was quite interested as I've
always wanted to participate in an activity like this. For me, volunteering at times
like this is really beneficial for both the society and for my satisfaction. Helping out in the community has always been something I always look forward to doing. It just brings me so much joy to see others happy. That is why I would like to volunteer in your program
.However, I do have some questions regarding the volunteer
program
. May I be notified as to which roles are still available? If there are more roles available
I hope you can notify me as soon as possible, I would really appreciate your response. Furthermore, I would like to ask about the time
commitment required, because
I want to make sure that I have time
to spare as I want to be fully committed during the duration of the program
. Lastly, as for the application
process, is the process online, such as in a website or application
or is it offline, where we are required to go to the application
center
to submit our application
?I would appreciate your responses to my doubts. I would like to apologize if I am taking up your
time
or if I am disturbing you. Again, I would be grateful to hear back from you. Thank you so much for reading this letter.Sincerely,
Anabella