IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7
7.0
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29 Jul 24, 07:45
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The letter effectively addresses all the tasks with a good range of vocabulary and clear organization. Minor grammatical errors and slightly repetitive vocabulary usage prevent it from achieving a perfect score.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You were invited to a friend's housewarming party and enjoyed the gathering. Write a letter to thank your friend.
Thank your friend for the invitation
Mention something specific you enjoyed at the party
Offer to help with any future gatherings
#Thank You
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:6
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Dear Pave,
First of all, the
housewarming
party
was terrific! I had a blast last night. I still can't
get over the fact that you made such a remarkable gathering. I am thankful that you did not forget to invite me over
even if I could not help you set up everything.I'm
quite impressed that you organized it so well. I want to commend you for pulling it off all together. Needless to mention, the decoration in your home was impeccable. I couldn't
believe you have a knack for arranging flowers like a professional. The table arrangement was so beautiful, I enjoyed watching every detail of your creativity. Also, the food and drinks were the best! You ordered all my favorites
and I can't
thank you enough for considering my preferences. I was beyond satisfied. And lastly, the Dj that you hired for the party
was the best, he played all our favorite
songs in
high school and I have never enjoyed such a beautiful time with
any other parties
but yours.I just want to let you know that
I'm
truly sorry that I
couldn'
help you enough with your
housewarming
party
because of my busy schedule, but rest assured that I will make time to help in your future gatherings.
Just message me in advance. Trust me, you have my word.Love,
Carren.