IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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17 Mar 25, 19:02
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. While the structure is generally logical, the letter could benefit from improved coherence and a more varied vocabulary to enhance clarity and engagement.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Doctor Appointment
#Semi-Formal
You need to get a routine check-up for your child. Write a letter to your pediatrician's office.
Mention your child's age and health history
Request an appointment for a routine check-up
Ask about any necessary preparations or documents
Submitted Answer
Words178|Paragraphs7
English:
Global Issues:
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Officer
I am writing to express my concern about my kid. I want to book a monthly
check
-up for him
since the last check
-up was 3 weeks ago.My son Joe will become 8 years old after this
brithday
on this Friday. His physical health history had been excelente
, but last week his tearcher
told us Joe's left eye was hitted
by a tennis ball when he was playing in the playground. So, for this time, I want to do a vision check for him.I
enquire
to book the eye check together with the routine check
. I would appreciate
if you could book a
appointment after this week, as the whole family are preparing for his birthday; hence we are lack of time to do the check
-up.I will bring his new identification card and medical record with him. If there is anything more needed from as
please
do not hesitate to contact me. Thanking you in advance for your help, I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely
Oliver