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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
Overall Score
17 Mar 25, 19:01
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the main tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the letter's structure could be improved for better coherence and cohesion.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors21
Grammatical range and accuracy7
Lexical resource7
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response4

Writing Task

#Doctor Appointment
#Semi-Formal
You need to get a routine check-up for your child. Write a letter to your pediatrician's office.
Mention your child's age and health history
Request an appointment for a routine check-up
Ask about any necessary preparations or documents

Submitted Answer

Words177|Paragraphs7
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Officer
I am writing to express my concern about my kid. I want to book a monthly
check
-up for him since the last
check
-up was 3 weeks ago.
My son Joe will become 8 years old after this
brithday
on this Friday. His physical health had been
excelente
, but last week his
tearcher
told us Joe's left eye was
hitted
by a tennis ball when he was playing in the playground. So this time, I want to do a vision check for him.
I
enquire
to book the eye check together with the routine
check
. I would
appreciate
if you could book
a the
appointment after this week, as the whole family are preparing for his
birthday hence
we are lack of time to do the
check
-up.
I will bring his new identification card and medical record with him. If there is anything more needed from as
please
do not hesitate to contact me. Thanking you in advance for your help, I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Oliver

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