IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
04 Nov 24, 20:28
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all tasks but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the letter's coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions and organization.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 22 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Your colleague has been accepted into a top graduate program. Write a letter to congratulate them.
Congratulate them on their acceptance
Mention the effort they put into applying
Express your confidence in their future success
#Congratulatory Letter
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:160
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Navpreet,
Hope you are doing great. I recently heard about your selection in graduate program, and I am very glad by this news.
Many many
conratulations
on your success. I was eagerly waiting for the list of selected candidates on college
website to be uploaded. Finally
my wait was over last night when I found your name there. I immidiately
thought to call you but
it was too late as it was around 12am.I know the that you did a lot of hard work to get admission
in
this course. Although you got denied by them two times before, you didn't loose
hope and kept trying. I am proud of you and your efforts. I know you are not the person who easily lose
hope and stop
trying.Now I am feeling confident about your future that you would
definetely
be a succesful
girl. You are inspiration
for me and other students as well.your lovingly
Gurdeep