IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
04 Nov 24, 20:36
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While the structure is generally clear, the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions and more varied vocabulary.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 12 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
Your colleague has been accepted into a top graduate program. Write a letter to congratulate them.
Congratulate them on their acceptance
Mention the effort they put into applying
Express your confidence in their future success
#Congratulatory Letter
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:160
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Navpreet,
Congratulations on your success. I recently heard about your selection in graduate program, and I am very glad by this news. I was eagerly waiting for the list of selected candidates on
college
website to be uploaded. Finally
my wait was over last night when I found your name there. I know that your
are also very happy with this result as it was your dream.I can't deny that you did a lot of hard work to get admission
in
this course. Although you got denied by them two times before, you didn't lose hope and kept applying. I know you are not the person who easily take off the things. You believe in your efforts and keep trying until positive result.I
am feeling
confident about your future that you would definitely be a successful girl. You are inspiration
for me and other students as well. I am proud of you.Your lovingly
Gurdeep