IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter covers all tasks but lacks a semi-formal tone and contains numerous grammatical errors. Improved coherence and vocabulary variety would enhance the overall quality.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors60
Grammatical range and accuracy23
Lexical resource28
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response3

Writing Task

#Holiday Plans
#Informal
You are planning a holiday with your friend. Write a letter to your friend.
Explain the destination you have chosen.
Suggest activities you can do there.
Ask for your friend's opinion on your plans.

Submitted Answer

Words235|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
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Dear My Friend
About the plan for
trip
to
thailand
next month,
i
recently
check
the flight schedule, they just have one schedule in the morning at 8 am, so
i
will book for that and
i
already book the hotels to in Bangkok.
Yesterday
i
make
itenerary
for our
trip
.
we
will visit
thailand
for 6
days
so for 3
days
we will stay in
bangkok
and
2
days
we move to
pattaya
.
theres a lot of activity in
bangkok
for 3
days
.
first
day
we will
exlplore
icon
siam
mall and
asiatique
.
the
next
day
we
will shoping
in
pratunam
and other
market place
.
last
day
in
bangkok
we will visit some iconic
place
like Wat Arun, Wat Pho and grand palace.
after that
we will move our destination to
pattay
using bus, it will take 2 hours from
bangkok
.
in
pattaya
we will explore nature place like the sea, and popular garden in there.
about
the transportation in both
bangkok
and
pattaya
we will use traditional
vehichle
called
tuktuk
and motorcycle.
for
the last
day
we will directly go to the airport from
pattaya
using
rental
car.
i will send this
itenerary
to you, and please give me your feedback.
if
you disagree with my plan, just text me and tell me your opinion so we can
discussion
our
trip
plan together and
makes
our
trip
being good and memorable.
thank
you.

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