IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
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The letter covers all the required points but contains several grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 32 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You recently went on a trip and want to share your experiences with a friend. Write a letter to your friend.
Describe the places you visited
Mention some memorable experiences
Suggest meeting up to share more details and photos
#Friend Meeting
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:164
Paragraphs:2
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Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Muna
..
I am really so excited to write to you and tell you about my recent trip to Vienna. It was like a dream, one of the best cities
i
have ever leid
eyes on. In
the first day I have
a quick tour in the Centre of Vienna, drinking coffee, enjoying the weather and have
a very short and amazing ride on the hourse
. Second day I start
my day by visiting one on
the most impressive palance
in the region, Schounbron
schluss
, a very huge building full of the heritage and traditional stories. I have visited alot
of museum and art houses since Vienna is a very famouse
in this field. there
is
alot
of memories that i
would to talk to you about with details, and i
have took
to
many photos, what do you think to meet next Sunday in the same coffee we used to meet in? See u
there and I can not
wait to see you.