IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task with clear structure and appropriate formality. While the grammar and vocabulary are strong, there is room for more complex sentence structures and varied vocabulary to enhance the writing further.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 2 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have come across a scholarship for students interested in environmental science. Write a letter to the scholarship provider to apply.
Explain your passion for environmental science
Detail your academic achievements in this field
Discuss how the scholarship will help your studies and future career
#Scholarship Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:6
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Dear Ms. Smith,
My name is Bettina Ramas, and I am writing to apply for the 2024 Environmental Science Scholarship Grant you recently posted on the school bulletin board. With deep passion for studying sustainability, I believe I will be a good recipient of the award. My interest in the field began as an undergraduate when I joined a team to create several recycling
centers
in our school. Additionally, I entered other project teams that help the environment after high school graduation.Despite being a working student, I am a consistent
honor
student, frequently on the list of top performers in our college. And if granted the scholarship, I will no longer need part-time employment to fund my studies. This will help me focus more on my education and extra-curricular
activities, both positively impacting the Environmental Science Institute of the university.The award will also be an impressive entry to my resume, bringing me a step closer to my goal of becoming a sustainability manager in the future.
I am looking forward to the scholarship committee's positive feedback on my application. If you have any questions or clarifications, please feel free to contact me so we can discuss further.
Sincerely, Bettina Ramas