IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
Overall Score
02 Aug 24, 08:22
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The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are moderate, but the letter could be more logically organized and clearer in its expression.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You have won a contest and the prize is a vacation trip. Write a letter to your employer requesting leave.
Explain how you won the contest
Provide the dates you will be away
Offer to complete urgent tasks before you leave
#Vacation Request
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:153
Paragraphs:6
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Mrs. Amara,
I am deeply sorry if my letter leads to your inconvenience. I won a competition of Spanish Speech in Belgia and gifted a three
days
vacation trip to Louvain-la-Neuve. I was one of the best contestant
. They decided to reward me because of my fluency, they way how to attract the people and
they really surprised I made a very rare opening and closing which they have
never see
before.Mrs, I will depart three days later, they have provided me
all
the stuffs
. With all due respect, I wish you could give me an excuse on
this situation. I have worked with you for years and as my loyalty lies, I am willing to do all urgent things and tasks before I leave. Please provide me an information realting
to that. Again and again, my apology to
this condition.Thank you Mrs, Amara.
Yours Faithfully,
Juan Arfheikh