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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)

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27 Oct 24, 23:18
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The letter effectively addresses the task with clear inquiries about prerequisites and preparatory materials. However, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. The vocabulary is appropriate but could be more varied.
Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response8.0
Total Errors20
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource7
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response1
Question
You want to inquire about the prerequisites for a course you are interested in registering for.
Mention the course you are interested in
Ask about the specific prerequisites required
Inquire about any preparatory materials or courses
#Course Registration
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:172
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Mr. Victor,
I have been looking to
enroll
in the digital marketing
course
on the Marketing College and I found your email in the contact information related to this
course
. I was wondering if you could
give
me further information about the prerequisites for the
course
.
I saw
in the website
it mentioned you need to have a bachelor's degree
but
I was not sure if a
bachelors
in arts is enough. Moreover, it says it is mandatory to
demostrate
knowledge
in
excel
and some basic programming
leanguage
, nevertheless, it did not specify how
should I
prove it. Do I need a certification or will
you
asses my skills?
Finally, I wanted to know if you could provide me with some preparatory material or if there
is
any recommendations you could give me on books to read or websites to consult in order to go deeper into the topic and have some sense of knowledge before starting the
course
.
I would appreciate any help.
Thanks in advance.
Regards,
Valentina Arias

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