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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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The letter addresses the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Vocabulary is limited and lacks variety, while coherence and cohesion are hindered by unclear sentence structures.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Writing Task
#Subscription Renewal
#Semi-Formal
You have received a reminder to renew your subscription to a health magazine. Write a letter to the subscription department.
Mention your current subscription.
Inquire about any new features of the magazine.
Request the renewal procedure.
Submitted Answer
Words136|Paragraphs7
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Dear Mr. Subscriber Manager,
I
receved
a reminder about my subscriber in your magazine health about the termination of my abonation
.My actual plan is for 3 months, and I would like to
extein
it for another one year. Is it possible?Is there any new
articels
about the eaten dissoster
or problems with the sleep? It will be amazing
if there is more stuff in these area
of health. I will do the renewal though, so, I need to be sure if is it
the same procedure for doing it or not. Because the last time I did in person in your office, should I come again in it?Thank you very much for your help in advance, and if you need any other information, please
dont
hasitate
to contact me.Best Regards,
Anna John