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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8.5 (General Training)
8.5
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16 Aug 24, 11:02
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and addresses all the bullet points effectively. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the vocabulary is appropriate, though it could be slightly more diverse. The coherence and cohesion are strong, but the logical flow could be improved with smoother transitions between points.
| Overall score | 8.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 6 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You attended a workshop and found the service to be excellent. Write a letter to the workshop organizer.
Describe the workshop and its purpose
Compliment the service and support provided
Recommend any improvements for future workshops
#Service Review
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Dear Mr. Smith,
I recently attended the Digital Sales Strategies
workshop
held on August 12, 2024, and I wanted to take a moment to express my appreciation for the excellent service and support provided throughout the event.The
workshop
was incredibly informative and well-structured, offering a deep dive into the latest trends and strategies in digital marketing. The purpose of the workshop
, to enhance our understanding of effective marketing techniques, was clearly achieved. The presentations were engaging, and the practical sessions allowed us to apply the concepts in real-time, which was extremely beneficial.I was particularly impressed with the professionalism of the organizers and the support team. From registration to the end of the event, everything was handled smoothly. The instructors were knowledgeable and approachable, always willing to clarify doubts and offer additional insights.
If I were to suggest any improvements for future
workshops
, it would be to perhaps extend the duration of the Q&A sessions. There were many great questions, and an extended time might allow for even more in-depth discussions.Thank you,
Joshua Kaler