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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
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08 Aug 24, 05:45
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors16
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Class Registration
#Semi-Formal
You enrolled in a class but have to change your schedule due to work commitments. Write a letter to the course coordinator.
Describe the class you enrolled in.
Explain why you need to change the schedule.
Request information on alternative class times.

Submitted Answer

Words163|Paragraphs8
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Mr. Ron,
I would like to request a change in my schedule for my history lecture due to some conflicts. I got registered for a
wednesday
afternoon batch which is the same day as my work. As
i
am working at Dominos as a
part time
shift manager, but my commitment to my work schedule has been made ahead of enrolling in this course.
However, It was already tried by me to adjust my schedule at work. Unfortunately, they are unable to corporate for
atleast
3 more months.
It is crucial to be able to work
atleast
20 hours during a recession in order to survive.
Some alternate times
has
been searched by me to enrol. The most prior one is for Monday
evening
which should be adjusted by the lecturer and would work best for me . For that reason, an online request is already submitted. I would really appreciate the approval from your end.
Thankyou for understanding.
Your's Sincerley,
Kirti

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