IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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08 Aug 24, 08:40
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are affected by poor sentence structure and lack of clear transitions. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 26 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You enrolled in a class but have to change your schedule due to work commitments. Write a letter to the course coordinator.
Describe the class you enrolled in.
Explain why you need to change the schedule.
Request information on alternative class times.
#Class Registration
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:8
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Dear Mr. Ron,
I would like to request a change in my schedule for my history lecture due to some conflicts. I got registered for a
wednesday
afternoon batch which is same
day for
my work. As i
am working at Dominos as a part time
shift manager, but my commitment to my work schedule has been made ahead of enrolling in this course.However, It was already tried by me to adjust my schedule at work
unfortunately
they
are unable to corporate for atleast
3 months.It is crucial to be able to work
atleast
20 hours during recession
in order to survive.Some alternate times
has
been searched by me to enroll
the most prior one is for Monday evening
which should be adjusted by the lecturer. For that reason
an online request is already submitted. i
would really appreciate the approval from your end.Thankyou for understanding.
Your's Sincerley,
Kirti