IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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09 Aug 24, 09:18
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise to improve clarity and formality.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You have been invited to give a lecture at a conference, but due to a personal emergency, you need to reschedule. Write a letter to the conference organizer explaining the situation.
Inform about the personal emergency
Suggest alternative dates for the lecture
Express your willingness to cooperate with the new schedule
#Event Postponement
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:159
Paragraphs:6
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Mr. Rob,
I am very
disppointed
that i
have to do this
as i
need to reschedule the lecture at the conference. My truely
apologies to the whole team because of a family emergency i
am unable to be present there at the conference hall to provide the lecture but
it was an honour to be selected for this big opportunity.I hope that some other dates can be arranged by the head
office
as i
would be able to cooperate with any date decided further in next month. Most probably the suitable dates are on weekends, but can still make it work for others too.I understand that this is a short notice for the modifications as you have to make some arrangements as well.
Again
i
am sorry for the disruption and inconvenience you had with this act. Thank you so much for your understanding and patience i
really
appreciate that.Your's Sincerley,
Dora Lee