IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
14 Sept 24, 06:14
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the letter could be more logically organized and polished in terms of vocabulary usage.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have found a rental property that you are interested in and would like to inquire about the lease terms.
Provide details of the property you are interested in
Ask about the rental price and lease terms
Inquire about any additional costs or fees
#Rental Agreement
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:177
Paragraphs:7
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Mr. Perera,
I am writing
withreference
to the advertisement published in
Ikman site, regarding the three bedroom
house located in Maharagama - Nawinna area. According to the advert, it has 2 attached bathrooms and have
plenty of space for parking.Through this letter, I would
liuke
to inquir
about the expected monthly fee and the rental period. Same, kindly confirm me whether the dogs are allowed at
the premises. As I am running a small online store of gift collection, will that also be acceptable.Further, I would like to know the process of settling monthly electricity and the water bills. And what are your conditions in
reguler
maintenance of the property and who will bare
the cost. When renewing the agreement or if we are moving from the property, what are the steps that I need to follow. And at last, I would like to know about the key money and how many months advance payment we need to make, if
we are proceeding further.Seeking for your
favorable
response in this regard.Thank you
Binuki.