IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and lacks a clear structure. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the letter could benefit from improved coherence and cohesion to enhance readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Hotel Reservation
#Semi-Formal
You recently stayed at a hotel and were charged incorrectly. Write a letter to the hotel manager to request a refund for the overcharge.
Provide details of your stay
Explain the incorrect charge
Ask for a refund
Submitted Answer
Words150|Paragraphs9
English:
Global Issues:
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Mr/Miss manager,
My name is Anna Peterson, and the reason that
im
writting
, is a
incorrect charge in my billing for the stayed at your hotel.So, I have been stayed for 3 days, respectively form March 14, 2025
till
March 16, 2025. I did the book and the pay online from Booking.com. The total amount of the billing was $435.After two days, I saw another withdrawal from my credit card for the same booking with an amount $100.
Please,
im
asking a
refund for this $100, because
I belive
it was a mistake.My Credit Card details are: Visa Card, in name of Anna Peterson,
minewhile
, you will find attached the recipe of my two bills.Thank you in advance for your help!
For any other
question
, please, don't
hasitate
to email or call me in my cellular number: 6475241258Have a nice day,