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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
Overall Score
08 Apr 25, 15:05
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses all tasks but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the letter's coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors19
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response3

Writing Task

#Resignation Letter
#Formal
You have decided to resign from your job due to a long commute. Write a formal resignation letter.
Announce your resignation
Explain the issue with the commute
Provide your final working day
Express gratitude for the job opportunity

Submitted Answer

Words131|Paragraphs1
English:UK English
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Dear Mr. Laurent, I am writing this letter to inform you that
i
am no longer
extend
my probation period. Considering the company area which is located in Central Jakarta whereas my house is in Tangerang, it is such a long destination to commute with the train. It approximately required me 2 hours every time
i
go to the office and
i
found it as an obstacle that can be a burden for a longer period. Therefore,
i
write this resignation letter with a deep consideration. My last working day would be on 15 January next week and
i
am willing to
transfering
my knowledge and job tasks to the new Admin. Thank you so much for the opportunity,
i
am
honored
to be working in such cooperative company like this.

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