IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
Overall Score
12 Nov 24, 08:28
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is basic, and coherence could be improved with better organization and transitions.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 22 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You have recently moved to a new city and need to meet with a real estate agent to find a house.
Introduce yourself
Explain your housing needs
Propose a meeting time
Mention any specific requirements
#Meeting Request
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:156
Paragraphs:11
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Dear Mr.John,
Hope you are doing good. I am Rasika, recently moved to Joseph town. One of my
freind
introduce
your company to me.I am doing my
stdudies
in the City University therefore
I am looking for a small annex for me and my family.I prefer
small
place with one bedroom, a bathroom and a small living area. We do not need a parking area because currently we do not have a vehecle
. It is great if you can find a place very closs
to the town. My budget isw
not more than $ 500.I would like to meet you and discuss more details about the house. I am available on this weekend from 9.00 am to 1.30pm.
Please let me know your
conviniance
time.Most important thing is we are hoping to have
peaceful
environment.I am looking forward to
here
from you soon.Thaank you,
Yours Faithfully
Rasika Pallawala