IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5

5.5
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The letter addresses all bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the letter could be more concise and better organized. Vocabulary usage is adequate but not varied.

Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors20
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource9
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2
Question
You have an appointment with a tax consultant, but you need to reschedule due to a personal reason.
Explain the personal reason.
Suggest a new date and time.
Apologize for any inconvenience.
#Appointment Change
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:203
Paragraphs:6
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear, Mr. John
B Company's Tax Consultant
Good Evening, Mr. John. Sorry to interfere you this
evening
. I write this message for you to tell about our appointment. According to the deal which we made before, we will have the
appoinment
this
evening
at 8 pm. Unfortunately, I am really
apologize
for any inconvenience in advance. Unexpectedly, I have to do an operation this
evening
. There are a lot of patients came this
evening
due to the accident which happened in Britney Hallway
Kilometers
8. Due to the lack of human resources in my hospital, I have to take a part in this operation. With this reason, I would like to you to reschedule our appointment. Fortunately, I am free tomorrow
evening
in the same
time
. Another
suggestions
would be
in
the weekend morning. I have a lot of
time
in the morning from 7 am until 11 am. I hope you are available at that
time
.
Let me know
if you have another suggestions about the date and
time
.
Feel free to
have a discussion about that. I am looking for your replies.
Thank you for your
acknowldgements
. Once again, I really apologize for
the any
inconvenience.
Sincerly,
Edeline Felicia Dharmawan