IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
14 Jul 24, 18:37
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the letter could be more concise and better organized. Vocabulary usage is adequate but not varied.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have an appointment with a tax consultant, but you need to reschedule due to a personal reason.
Explain the personal reason.
Suggest a new date and time.
Apologize for any inconvenience.
#Appointment Change
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:203
Paragraphs:6
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear, Mr. John
B Company's Tax Consultant
Good Evening, Mr. John. Sorry to interfere you this
evening
. I write this message for you to tell about our appointment. According to the deal which we made before, we will have the appoinment
this evening
at 8 pm. Unfortunately, I am really apologize
for any inconvenience in advance. Unexpectedly, I have to do an operation this evening
. There are a lot of patients came this evening
due to the accident which happened in Britney Hallway Kilometers
8. Due to the lack of human resources in my hospital, I have to take a part in this operation. With this reason, I would like to you to reschedule our appointment. Fortunately, I am free tomorrow evening
in the same time
. Another suggestions
would be in
the weekend morning. I have a lot of time
in the morning from 7 am until 11 am. I hope you are available at that time
. Let me know
if you have another suggestions about the date and time
. Feel free to
have a discussion about that. I am looking for your replies.Thank you for your
acknowldgements
. Once again, I really apologize for the any
inconvenience.Sincerly,
Edeline Felicia Dharmawan