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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and lacks coherence and cohesion. Vocabulary is limited and some phrases are awkwardly constructed, affecting clarity.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You booked a holiday package from a travel company, but the services provided did not match the description. Write a letter to the travel company.
Detail the discrepancies between the description and the actual services.
Explain the impact of these discrepancies on your holiday.
Request a refund or other compensation.
#Travel Booking
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:6
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Dear Mr. Holiday,
I've
got a reservation in your Holiday Hotel last week, I have already
payed
but the final booking file description
doesn't
match with the
charateristics
showed in the
web site
: the first one talks about a small camera with a bathroom, while the list written in your official page includes the free access to the swimming pool and the breakfast - both of them specifically involved in the prize!
The missing details in my reservation suggest me
that I have payed
for something I can't
enjoy at whole.Of course, this inconvenient situation represents a problem to me
, because
I have chosen your hotel especially to get relax in the swimming pool area and for the apparently cheap prize, considering the services it should have offered. This is very unprofessional from you and for your staff.For the reasons just explained,
I'll
ask you a refund for the camera booked or the supplementation of the missing services I've
written about.Waiting for your response,
Paola.