IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5

7.5
Overall Score
04 Aug 24, 00:45
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The letter is well-structured and covers all the required points with appropriate formality. Minor improvements could be made in coherence and lexical variety to achieve a higher score.

Overall score7.5
Grammatical range and accuracy9.0
Lexical resource8.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors8
Grammatical range and accuracy0
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response2
Question
You have an interview for a job position, but you need to reschedule due to a prior engagement.
Tell why you need to reschedule.
Suggest a new date and time.
Express your apologies for any inconvenience caused.
#Appointment Change
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:95
Paragraphs:8
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Dear Mr.
Himansh
Verma,
I am writing to request a rescheduling of our scheduled interview on August 10 at 11 am for the Customer service position.
Unfortunately, an unforeseen and unavoidable prior commitment has arisen that conflicts with our scheduled interview time.
I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause and understand if this requires adjustments on your end. I would be available to interview on August 11 at 11 am .
Thank you for your understanding and flexibility. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further with you.
Sincerely,
Kirti Verma
6047009806