IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
27 Oct 24, 22:57
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety, and coherence could be improved with better logical flow and paragraphing.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have decided to cancel your membership at a local language school. Write a letter to the school administrator.
Explain why you are writing
Describe your reason for canceling the membership
Request confirmation of the cancellation
#Membership Cancellation
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:181
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Mr. George,
I am writing regarding my membership at your
leanguage
school. Unfortunately
I will need you to cancel my suscription
. I have been member
for almost six months and
I am really greatfull
for what I have learn
overall. I have definitely improve
my English and boost my skills to an other
level.The reason for my request is that my husband wants to start studying English
and
we can not
afford two memberships. Moreover
we found a teacher who can come once a week to our house and teach us both a class for a very convinient
price.I
really
appreciate all the improvements I had while stuying
with you
and I will not hesitate on recommending
your school to my friends and collegues
. Please forgive me for this sudden change in plan but
be certain that if it comes an opportunity in the future to join the agency again
I will not doubt it.I will be
gratefull
if you could confirm me by answering this letter when my membership have
been cancelled.Yours
sincerily
,Valentina Arias