IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5

(General Training)

IELTS Letter Sample Band 5

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17 Jul 24, 17:11

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The letter addresses the main tasks but lacks clarity and coherence in some parts. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting readability and formality. Improved structure and more varied vocabulary would enhance the response.

Overall score	5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	4.0

Question

You are interested in attending a summer school program. Write a letter to the program coordinator.

Describe your current studies and how the summer program fits into your academic plan

Ask about the program curriculum and schedule

Inquire about accommodation options

#Study Plan

#Semi-Formal

Submitted Answer

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Words:164

Paragraphs:6

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Dear Mr Fa Zhou,

I am writing this letter regarding my interest to the summer school program that is opened.

At the moment, I am studying Management Studies and will be finished by the end of month. I have done the research that my major links to the program you open and decided to apply to the program.

As long as my studies, I have a schedule of four times fully a week study and once a week of group discussion. As it is, I would like to ask about the schedule that your school offer and the curriculum whether is it still following the recent one or old one or both.

Another thing which I have to make sure

the accommodation, is there any rent room which offered by the school

they are

alright to find room for students.

I wish my letter finds you well and can in touch with me as soon as possible. Thank you, Mr Fa Zhou.

Total Errors	15
Grammatical range and accuracy	4
Lexical resource	2
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	5