IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
Overall Score
09 Nov 24, 18:38
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but lacks formality and contains numerous grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are affected by the lack of clear structure and transitions, while vocabulary is limited and repetitive.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 32 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:170
Paragraphs:3
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Mr.Book Manager,
I hope this letter find you will.I am writhing this because I saw an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a
bookstore
.I
really
loooking
forword
to
get
this job.Now I will tell you why am I
really
interested in this job.The first reason is
I
am
really
good at organizing things and I love doing it.
Secondly
I used to work as a librarian back in school. And most Importantly
I
really
into reading
book
which
mean
I can
recommed
just by asking to clients just by asking what kind of book
are they
looking for.
Plus
I also know most of the
author
because
I've
beeing
reading all type of
generes
since I was five.
I belive
these skills are right for this position.I do believe that I am the idea
candinate
.
This is all for now.Thank you for your time reading this email.I will be waiting for your letter.Best Liam,