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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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The letter addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, affecting the overall clarity and formality of the letter.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 31 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You recently attended a workshop on time management organized by your company. Write a letter to the organizer to thank them for the workshop.
Express your gratitude for the workshop
Mention two things you learned
Suggest how the workshop could be improved
#Thank You
#Semi-Formal
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Dear Mr.
Aqeel
;I am writing to express my
gratitudite
for the training held last week regarding a very important aspect of time
management.Workshop session
orgnaized
by company was a great step to building new skills and innnovations
in employees. Such a session will create enthuisam
and new motivation in employees. I am realy
thankful to company
for this type of innovative step.From this training
workshop
we leart
very important life lessons which I want to share with you especialy
two thing
is very important. First one is if you manage your
time
effectively you will be more successful in your life as compared to other people which do not manage the
time
.Furthermore, by managing
time
we can do extra jobs for the
time
which we saved.
Worksop was
realy
impressive but my
suggession
for next
time
workshop is, we need to add 2 more aspects
in
this and also need to increase
time
from 1 day to 3
days
which would be
realy
helpful to understanding complete aspect of
time
management field.
I am again
thank
you for such a mesmerised
skill.Your Faithfully;
Ghulam Murtaza