IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)
7.5
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01 Nov 24, 21:15
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task with clear and concise language, demonstrating a strong command of grammar and vocabulary. However, the coherence could be improved by providing a smoother transition between the reasons for extension and the request itself.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 2 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You are currently renting an apartment and your lease is about to expire. You wish to extend your rental agreement.
Explain why you want to extend the lease
Request the extension
Specify the duration of the extension you would like
#Rental Extension
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:113
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Miss Lindsay,
I am writing to inform you that I will be vacating the
apartment
located at
Fairview Street, with my lease expiring on November 30, 2024. I would like to request an extension of my rental agreement, as this apartment
suits my needs very well. It is conveniently located near my daycare and other essential shopping locations such as grocery stores and Dollarama.I would greatly appreciate it if you could extend my rental agreement until March 2025. I am comfortable with all the amenities you currently provide in this
apartment
.I hope for a positive response regarding my request. Thank you for your understanding and assistance.
Yours sincerely,
Lovepreet Kaur