IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6.5 (General Training)

6.5
Overall Score
01 Apr 25, 15:44
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Overall Feedback

The letter effectively addresses the task with a warm tone, covering all bullet points. However, minor grammatical errors and slightly awkward phrasing affect the overall coherence and lexical resource. Improved sentence structure and varied vocabulary could enhance clarity and engagement.
Overall score6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors12
Grammatical range and accuracy4
Lexical resource1
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response3

Writing Task

#Thank You
#Semi-Formal
You have just returned from a holiday at a friend’s house. Write a letter to your friend to thank them for the stay.
Thank your friend for their hospitality
Mention something you particularly enjoyed
Invite them to stay with you in the future

Submitted Answer

Words126|Paragraphs9
English:UK English
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Dear, Meyer
Hartbeesfontein is a wonderful little town. Thank you so much for sharing your home with us, and giving us a memorable experience. We had tremendous fun and look forward to visiting soon.
We are absolutely in awe
with
all your animals. Seeing all the wildlife on the farm on horseback is something that we will treasure forever. Your horses have excellent manners. It was a wonderful experience, Charl and I enjoyed it tremendously.
We appreciate your efforts in creating
to
most delicious Afrikaner dishes.
Vogelstruisfontein is a farm close to my heart - thank you for creating lasting memories.
Please do allow us to return the favour soon?
We would love for you to come visit us in Bloemfontein.
Your's sincerely
Bianca and Charl

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