IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
02 Nov 24, 15:08
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the letter could be more cohesive with better logical flow between ideas.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Your internet connection has been very slow lately. Write a letter to your internet service provider.
Explain the problem
Describe how it is affecting your work
Request a solution
#Service Request
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:210
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Mdm,
I am writing regarding my internet
connection
being very slow lately. I have noticed a significant decrease in the speed of my wi-fi
after just installing in a few weeks ago. I would turn the device used for the internet connection
and on it back again for the connection
to be strong again for a few minutes but
it would plummet back to being weak again. It has gotten
to the point that i
would simply use the hotspot on my phone.It has greatly affected my work as I am a stay at home mother living off my freelancing job, I host many meetings with my clients through video call
and
they have had many complaints about the call ending abruptly when speaking about vital details of our sessions.
Other than that, it would take me a very long time to retrieve my clients
information, resulting in shorter
time span for me to have a basic background of the problem to every one of my clients.I would greatly appreciate having one of your employees skilled in
fixing
this issue, come down to my house to either set up an entirely new system for my internet connection
or fix my current set up.With Regards,
Wardina