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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)

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03 Apr 25, 14:30
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Overall Feedback

The letter effectively addresses the task with a clear apology and explanation, but could improve coherence with smoother transitions. Grammar is mostly accurate, though some sentences could be more concise, and vocabulary is appropriate but lacks variety.
Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors7
Grammatical range and accuracy2
Lexical resource1
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1

Writing Task

#Apology Letter
#Informal
You missed an important event that your friend invited you to. Write an apology letter to your friend.
Explain why you missed the event.
Apologize for not being there.
Express your regret and ask for forgiveness.

Submitted Answer

Words182|Paragraphs7
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Dear Mark,
I’m writing this letter to express my sincerest apology for not being present at your birthday party. It was not intentional, as I had an unplanned emergency at home which required urgent attention. I also didn’t think it was a good idea to call and inform you at the time of the emergency, so it doesn’t spoil or affect your positive mood during your activity.
Additionally, I’d like to let you know I’m sorry I was not able to make it
for
the event, I know this would have caused you disappointment and worry. Considering I had a notable part to play in the event, I’d normally not miss it for anything if not for the unforeseen event. Once again, accept my apology
Beyond that, I sincerely regret I couldn’t join you in celebrating your special day. I promise to make it up to you by being more reliable in the future, even though in this case, it was totally out of my control
Looking forward to hearing from you
Best Wishes,
Frank

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