IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
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The letter addresses the tasks but lacks detail and clarity in some areas. Grammar and vocabulary are basic with noticeable errors, and the coherence and cohesion could be improved for better readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You are planning a weekend getaway with your friends. Write a letter to one of your friends.
Suggest a destination.
Propose some activities for the trip.
Ask for their opinion on the plans.
#Travel Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:154
Paragraphs:7
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Margareth,
As I said before, I would like to suggest some places which we can visit in our destination country, America.
We can have some meal in the morning on each day, then on the third day we can have a walk near
Liberty
Statue and watch some Birds Show nearby, afterwards, in the
mid-day
we can have lunch,
do shopping
and go back to our motel almost dinner and
take
a rest for next journey.
I feel like these activities quite acceptable, moreover, we visit America for travelling, not to buy things or to stay, remember?
So, what do you think about my plans making, Margareth? I need to discuss more with you after I come back, if you agree, then we can start making our destination plan. You can think of what should be included as well.
See you around, Margareth. Can't wait to see you.
Your
rommate
,Fudge