IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 7

7.0
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The letter addresses all bullet points effectively and maintains a formal tone. However, there are minor grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing that affect readability and coherence. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied.

Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors13
Grammatical range and accuracy3
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:190
Paragraphs:8
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Dear Manager,
My name is Viktoria Orlay, and I am reaching out to you regarding your advertisement I saw in the local newspaper. I am currently attending high school
, however,
I decided that it will be helpful for me to find a part-time job, to start saving up for my future studies. Additionally, since my mother recently got fired, I need to step up and help my family to make ends meet.
My previous experience as a student council member helped me to improve my communication and problem-solving skills as well. My job was to
chanel
the students' wishes toward the teachers and vice versa. Moreover, as a bookworm myself, my second home is the school library. I have been into books since I learned to read, and own a huge collection myself.
If you
would find
my portfolio intriguing, I would be more than happy to have a formal meeting as well. My availabilities for the next week throughout the whole day are the following;
monday
,
wednesday
,
thursday
, and
friday
.
Thank you in advance for considering my application!
Hope to hear from you soon!
Sincerely,
Viktoria Orlay