IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
7.0
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all bullet points effectively and maintains a formal tone. However, there are minor grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing that affect readability and coherence. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:190
Paragraphs:8
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Dear Manager,
My name is Viktoria Orlay, and I am reaching out to you regarding your advertisement I saw in the local newspaper. I am currently attending high school
, however,
I decided that it will be helpful for me to find a part-time job, to start saving up for my future studies. Additionally, since my mother recently got fired, I need to step up and help my family to make ends meet.My previous experience as a student council member helped me to improve my communication and problem-solving skills as well. My job was to
chanel
the students' wishes toward the teachers and vice versa. Moreover, as a bookworm myself, my second home is the school library. I have been into books since I learned to read, and own a huge collection myself.If you
would find
my portfolio intriguing, I would be more than happy to have a formal meeting as well. My availabilities for the next week throughout the whole day are the following; monday
, wednesday
, thursday
, and friday
.Thank you in advance for considering my application!
Hope to hear from you soon!
Sincerely,
Viktoria Orlay