IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
Overall Score
28 Jul 24, 12:20
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The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are moderate, but the vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 26 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
You need to attend a wedding and require some days off. Write a letter to your manager requesting vacation leave.
Mention whose wedding you will be attending
Provide the dates you need off
Assure your manager that your responsibilities will be covered
#Vacation Request
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:111
Paragraphs:6
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Vocabulary Usage
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Manager
I would like to pass my days on leave, the reason is
, because
I would like to attend to my sisters's
wedding which due date it is the 3rd of March of the year in course. I migth
need a few weeks off from the 1st of March until the 20th of the same moth, the reason of
such a long days
it is because
I have to take a fligth
back home in
England.About my
resposabilities
, Jenny from accountant
office will covered
my duties in the time I will be away.Please do not
hesite
to contac
me if you have any concerns.Kind regards
L