IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)

6.0
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but contains grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors12
Grammatical range and accuracy2
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Resignation Letter
#Formal
You are resigning because you have accepted a new job in a different field. Write a formal resignation letter.
Announce your resignation
Mention the new job offer
Specify your last working day
Offer to help with the transition

Submitted Answer

Words140|Paragraphs7
English:US English
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Dear Manager,
I hope you are doing well.
I myself
, Aninda Kumar
Sharma
writing this email to let you know that I have decided to resign from this
company
. I have been working in our
company
as salesman for 2 years. At this point of my career, I
wanted
to explore different domain in the job industry. Recently, I got a job offer in a different
company
in a different field. I accepted the offer as I think
it's
the best decision at this point. My last working day in our
company
will be on 21st November.
I requesting you to contact me for any additional assistance needed to help with the transition. I pray and hope that you will be kind enough to accept my resignation letter and oblige thereby.
Best Regards
Aninda Kumar Sharma
Junior Salesman
XYZ

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