IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks detail and variety in vocabulary. There are some grammatical errors and the structure could be improved for better coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You recently had a meal delivered to your home and found it unsatisfactory. Write a letter to the food delivery service.
Describe the issues with your order
Explain how it affected your meal experience
Request a solution or compensation
#Service Feedback
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:98
Paragraphs:6
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Manager
I am writing to you to raise a
quiery
about an order I made from your restaurant that I found to be unsatisfactory. The steak
I ordered was to be rump steak
cooked medium rare. Instead
I recieved
a T bone steak
that was over cooked
.Steak
is my favourite meal and
I was really looking forward to enjoying it when I ordered it. So I was very disappointed with what I got.Could I please request a refund for my purchase or a coupon to use at the restaurant for another
steak
.
Kind Regards
Olerato