IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 7

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The letter addresses all the required points but contains some grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The vocabulary is appropriate but could be more varied to enhance the formality and clarity of the letter.

Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors13
Grammatical range and accuracy3
Lexical resource4
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2
Question
You have decided to resign from your job due to unsatisfactory salary and benefits. Write a formal resignation letter.
State your resignation intention
Explain the dissatisfaction with salary and benefits
Specify your last working day
#Resignation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:110
Paragraphs:3
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Dear Manager
I am writing this letter to express my intention to resign from my position. I am very
thankfull
for all of the years that we passed together. However, I already made up my mind to step down from this
company
. The main issue for my resignation is due to the amount of salary and benefit that the
company
gave to me. I feel undervalued by the
company
related to that side. I am planning to leave in a month, to
fulfill
the
one month
notice period. Friday, July 30th will be my last day. Thank you for everything. I wish nothing than the best for the
company
.
Sincerely.