IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)
7.5
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09 Nov 24, 18:42
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task with clear and relevant information, demonstrating a strong command of grammar and vocabulary. However, slight improvements in coherence and cohesion could enhance the logical flow and connection between ideas.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:185
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Manager,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for a part-time position at your
bookstore
. I am very
interested in this opportunity, as I have a deep appreciation for literature and enjoy sharing my knowledge with others. Working in a bookstore
aligns well with my interests, and I am enthusiastic about the chance to contribute to your team.I believe my previous experience makes me a suitable candidate for this role. I have worked part-time in a library for six months, where I assisted customers in finding materials, maintained inventory, and handled book returns. This experience has helped me develop strong organizational skills, customer service abilities, and a keen eye for detail. I am comfortable working with diverse customer groups and understand the importance of creating a welcoming environment for book enthusiasts.
I am available for an interview at your convenience. My schedule is flexible, and I can arrange to meet at any time that suits you. I look forward to discussing how my skills and passion for books can benefit your
bookstore
.Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Liam