IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6.5 (General Training)

6.5
Overall Score
11 Apr 25, 21:17
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Overall Feedback

The letter effectively addresses the task, covering all bullet points, but contains minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Vocabulary is appropriate but could be more varied, and the letter maintains a semi-formal tone throughout.
Overall score6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors11
Grammatical range and accuracy4
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Meeting Request
#Semi-Formal
You are a new member of a professional association and want to meet with a senior member to learn about networking opportunities.
Introduce yourself
Explain your interest in networking
Suggest a meeting time
Mention any specific areas you want to discuss

Submitted Answer

Words150|Paragraphs9
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Dear Manager,
Hope you are doing well, I am Polina Kuptsova, a new member of your professional
association
.
I am glad to be a part of your
association
, and I believe this is a great opportunity for me to develop my professional skills and expand my network.
I am extremely excited to explore the networking opportunities within your
association
. I would
appreciate
if I could be able to set a meeting with a senior member to learn more about this opportunity.
How does April 20th, Monday afternoon sounds for a meeting to chat more in depth about this?
I am curious about the networking system within your
association
, as well as partners you are working with.
Looking forward
to meet
a senior member! Please let me know if this date and time works and if
there
any other timing option available for me to come by.
Best regards,
Polina Kuptsova.

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