IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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02 Apr 25, 16:24
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks formal tone. Coherence and cohesion are affected by repetitive phrases and lack of clear structure, while vocabulary is limited and informal.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors38
Grammatical range and accuracy11
Lexical resource17
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response4

Writing Task

#Complaint Letter
#Formal
You purchased a pair of shoes online, but they were the wrong size and color. Write a letter to the online store's customer service.
Describe the issue with the shoes.
Explain how this mistake has inconvenienced you.
State what you would like the store to do to correct the issue.

Submitted Answer

Words156|Paragraphs2
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Paragraph Count Requirement
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Management,
On 20th of
april
2025
i
ordered online on your shopping portal Nike
shoe
size
36.(reference number 12648).The delivery was made on 22
april
sucessfully
.Once
i
receive
the
shoe
it was a defect
shoe
.The sole of the
shoe
was torn out,not only that the sole
ofthe
shoe
also was torn out.I was really looking
foward
for this
shoe
but
it really ruined my day.
because
of this
i
cant join the net ball
tournnament
coming up.Please help me return.By the
way
i
have ordered a red
shoe
and
i
have got a purple
shoe
instead the
shoe
i
received is also not the
size
that
i
ordered,its
turn
out to be
size
38 .
Im
very
dissaapointed
with the service.My only request is pls
chage
the
shoe
to correct
size
and colour.Thanks,Please do the delivery to the same
adresss
as soon as
posibble
.

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