IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
02 Aug 24, 19:24
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The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the letter could be more logically organized. Vocabulary is appropriate but lacks variety.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Your rental agreement for your current accommodation is about to expire. You wish to extend the lease.
Inform the landlord of your desire to extend the lease
Provide reasons for the extension
Suggest a convenient time to discuss further
#Rental Extension
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:153
Paragraphs:7
Formality Match
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Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Madam Laurent,
As you know, I rent your room's
apartment
due to the health condition of my grandmother. I have just received a letter from Dr. Mario, one of the doctors who looks
after my grandmother in the hospital. He says that my grandmother has to stay longer because she needs
more attention and medical check up for some times.By this
situation
I need
to extend my time in your room for at least until the middle of the month. On the other hand, I also need
to do a freelance work at the central cafe for five days.I
need
to know whether you have spare time to discuss about this
condition tomorrow in the mid-day
or not. However, we can reschedule it if you are unavailable. You can text me through instagram
or drop me a message to
my whatsapp
.Thank you Madam Laurent.
Your sincerely,
Adam