IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
Overall Score
27 Sept 24, 03:07
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but vocabulary usage is limited and sometimes incorrect.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:166
Paragraphs:6
Formality Match
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Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
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Dear Madam,
I am writing in response to your
advertisment
. Recently
I have had difficulties with my monthly payment, therefore
I decided to figure It out getting
a part-time job. My enormous fascination with the stories guided me to look for bookstores.During a great rang of my life I have hanged out surrounded by books. Every job I got was associated with
extraordinaries
publishings
such as McMillan
hence, would perform outstandingly my duties due to my extended past labor. Some abilities that makes
me a suitable candidate will be the capacity of organization, knowledge about various genders and authors, Wich would improve my agility through the fast searching. Furthermore, I would advise the customers excellently owing of
my understanding of what the
would prefer.I would be
geartful
if you call me to a formal interview. The next week, on Friday, if you at able that date, we could meet and agree on certain parameters.I look forward to your reply.
Your faithfully, Sara.