IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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01 Nov 24, 21:09
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and lacks a formal tone. Coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the logical flow could be improved with better organization and transitions.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are currently renting an apartment and your lease is about to expire. You wish to extend your rental agreement.
Explain why you want to extend the lease
Request the extension
Specify the duration of the extension you would like
#Rental Extension
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:148
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Landlord,
I am writing to inform you that I will be vacating an
apartment
located at fairview
street from the January 2083, and my lease is about to expire next month on 30 November 2024. I want to extend my rental agreement as this apartment
suits me very well. It is really close to my Daycare where I am workng
, moreover all of the other places like Grocery store, Dollarama and other required shopping stores are so close to me from this location.It would be greatly helpful for me if you could make an extension of an agreement of this
apartment
. I want to stay more here untill
next March 2025. I am pretty comfortable with all amenities that you allready
provide me in this place.I trust that you will be accepting my request.Thank you for your understanding and
asistance
.Your sincerely,
Lovepreet Kaur