IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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06 Apr 25, 13:07
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the main points but lacks clarity and structure, with several grammatical errors and informal language. Improved coherence and a more formal tone would enhance the overall quality, along with a more varied vocabulary.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors27
Grammatical range and accuracy7
Lexical resource11
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response5

Writing Task

#Travel Booking
#Semi-Formal
You booked a flight through a travel agency, but the flight was canceled without prior notice. Write a letter to the travel agency.
Explain the situation and how you found out about the cancellation.
Describe the inconvenience caused by the cancellation.
Ask for a refund or an alternative flight booking.

Submitted Answer

Words124|Paragraphs7
English:US English
Global Issues:
Word Count Requirement
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Klook Management
I am writing a letter because
i
received an email
today
stating that the flight
i
booked for April 30,
2025
going to
cebu
was canceled.
In the
emailed
it was canceled 2days ago.
why i am
only receiving an update
today
?
I should be there on May 1st because
thats
the wedding day of my dearest friend. I need to checked if the gown fits me.
i
need an update
today
because
i
was assigned to get the gifts for the guess so that
i
can manage my time accordingly.
Since it is the mistake on your end
im
hoping for a flight before the wedding day.
I'm
hoping for a flight reschedule
today
.
have a great day
maris

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