IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
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The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the letter could be more logically organized. Vocabulary usage is adequate but lacks variety.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You accidentally revealed a secret your friend shared with you. Write an apology letter to your friend.
Explain how the secret was revealed.
Apologize for breaking their trust.
Assure your friend it won't happen again.
#Apology Letter
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:260
Paragraphs:7
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Kate,
you are aware of the incident that took place at your cousin's house
and
I am certain you are upset with me for the things i
said which were supposed to be kept secrete between us. To the question I was asked, I just gave a sponteneous
response to the him
. I did not remember I was not to let it out.That morning, I remember going for a work. On the way back I met Tim
and
he told me he would be at your cousine
's later in the day. He asked I bring my dog
along because he loves to play with dogs
. I was excited that it would be a great idea to have both dogs
chase us while we played. The excitement while playing with the dogs
made me forget that we had promised each other not to reveal how your cousine
's dog
lost part of its belly hair. When Tim asked , I spilled it out without thinking.I have betrayed
you
I know but
can you find a place in your heart to forgive me? I would never do such a thing under normal conditions. It is not a habit of mine and
I am willing to make amends regardless of its cost.You can
relly
on me that it will never happen again and
I will do anything within my power to make it up to you. I would think twice and
I assure you that such events or questions would not catch me unawares.Your dear Friend,
Davies