IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)
7.5
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task and covers all bullet points. However, there are minor grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 8 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You are organizing a joint birthday celebration for yourself and a friend. Write an informal letter to a mutual friend inviting them to the party.
Explain the joint celebration and whose birthdays are being celebrated.
Mention the date and time.
Describe the location and any special activities planned.
#Birthday Invitation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:172
Paragraphs:8
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Dear Johnny
How have you been doing recently? We haven't met since last Christmas. I've been busy preparing for my final test in June. I am delighted to tell you that I passed the test with flying colours.
This month is worth celebrating since my birthday is on August 31st. Emma, my female buddy, celebrates her birthday in August. We have been together for two years and would want to share our delight with my friends. As a result, we wish to have supper with our common friends.
The dinner will be
place
on August 21st, which is next Sunday. It will begin at 7 p.m. The location is Rubby Tuesday Restaurant, a steakhouse in Causeway Bay. We have invited several close friends, including you.In addition to the delicious meals, we'll feature a fortunate draw area. Each visitor will get at least one gift. You do not need to purchase presents since we will prepare them.
I'd love to see you that evening.
Best wishes!
Tommy