IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and lacks coherence in some parts. Vocabulary is basic, and the letter could benefit from a more structured approach to improve clarity and flow.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors24
Grammatical range and accuracy10
Lexical resource8
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response2

Writing Task

#Apology Letter
#Informal
You made an insensitive comment that hurt your friend's feelings. Write an apology letter to your friend.
Explain that the comment was unintentional.
Apologize for the hurtful remark.
Reassure your friend of your good intentions.

Submitted Answer

Words134|Paragraphs6
English:UK English
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Dear John,
Ihave been
thinkink
a lot about what happened the other day, and
i
realize that
i
hurt you with my comment and action.
I feel
terible
about what
i
did and
i
wish could take it back.
Ypu
mean a lot
of
me, I hate that I hurt you.
I was stressed and
didn
'
t think things through before reacting. That's
no
a
excuse, but I wanted you to know that I didn't mean to hurt you.
Iwill
be
shure
to think before I speak next time, and
i
'll be more mindful of how my actions affect you.
I truly hope we can move past this and continue our friendship. You're very important to me, and
i
don't want to let this come between us.
Sincerely, Anna

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