IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
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05 Aug 24, 13:01
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the tasks and maintains a semi-formal tone. However, there are some grammatical errors and minor issues with coherence and cohesion that could be improved for a higher score.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
You are planning a solo trip and have been looking into different travel booking sites. Write a letter to your friend asking for their recommendations and advice.
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Mention the destination and type of trip2
Ask for their recommendations on travel booking sites3
Inquire about any safety tips for solo travelers#Travel Booking
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Dear John,
I
hope
this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to address and inquire about my solo trip. I have ran
into some problems and uncertainties along the way, and I am hoping
you could help me out since you frequently travel alone. This August, I am planning to have a trip to Bandung, West Java. I have booked a train ticket on the fifth at 3 PM; I am terrified of heights. I heard that there were astonishing sights in Bandung, especially the mountains and rivers.Currently, I have several days to spare that I wish to fill with exciting outdoor activities. If I am not mistaken, your parents were born in that city. I am
hoping
that you could provide me with suggestions as to where or what to do during those several days. I am also trying to find a comfotable
but affordable place to spend the nights. I am hoping
that you could give me a few options for the hotels, also the booking sites.My parents are concerned about the disease that is roaming in the city
and
I am trying to take safety measures. I will bring antibiotics and a first aid kit with me. If you could provide me with some safety tips
I would really appreciate it.I am looking forward to hearing back from you soon. Until then, stay safe and God Bless.
Sincerely,
James