IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
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05 Aug 24, 13:01
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the tasks and maintains a semi-formal tone. However, there are some grammatical errors and minor issues with coherence and cohesion that could be improved for a higher score.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You are planning a solo trip and have been looking into different travel booking sites. Write a letter to your friend asking for their recommendations and advice.
Mention the destination and type of trip
Ask for their recommendations on travel booking sites
Inquire about any safety tips for solo travelers
#Travel Booking
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:238
Paragraphs:7
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Dear John,
I
hope
this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to address and inquire about my solo trip. I have ran
into some problems and uncertainties along the way, and I am hoping
you could help me out since you frequently travel alone. This August, I am planning to have a trip to Bandung, West Java. I have booked a train ticket on the fifth at 3 PM; I am terrified of heights. I heard that there were astonishing sights in Bandung, especially the mountains and rivers.Currently, I have several days to spare that I wish to fill with exciting outdoor activities. If I am not mistaken, your parents were born in that city. I am
hoping
that you could provide me with suggestions as to where or what to do during those several days. I am also trying to find a comfotable
but affordable place to spend the nights. I am hoping
that you could give me a few options for the hotels, also the booking sites.My parents are concerned about the disease that is roaming in the city
and
I am trying to take safety measures. I will bring antibiotics and a first aid kit with me. If you could provide me with some safety tips
I would really appreciate it.I am looking forward to hearing back from you soon. Until then, stay safe and God Bless.
Sincerely,
James