IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all tasks but contains grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the letter's coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You are planning a visit to your hometown and want to meet up with old friends. Write a letter to one of your friends.
Inform them of your travel plans.
Mention the dates of your visit.
Suggest a time and place to meet.
#Travel Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:7
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Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good spirit! I am writing you this letter to inform you about my plan of
visiting
our hometown. In regards to
this, I am thinking of having a small get together
and catching up with our old friends. Due to our my hectic schedule, we seldom see each other
I think this will be the great time to meet.I already booked a ticket and will arrive on August
11,2024
at eleven in the morning and need to get back here on August 13 at 2 in the afternoon. I might first spend the day with the family and the next will be our meet up.I saw on
facebook
a new fancy restaurant there, I would love to try their dish. I will get a reservation for ten person
for lunch time
. Please inform our friends about the get together
.I hope to hear from you.
All the best,
Grace