IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)

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The letter effectively addresses all the tasks with clear and concise information. However, there are minor grammatical errors and the vocabulary could be more varied. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the logical flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas.
Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors11
Grammatical range and accuracy4
Lexical resource1
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response2

Writing Task

#Baby Shower Invitation
#Informal
You are planning a baby shower for your best friend and want to invite your childhood friend. Write a letter to your childhood friend.
Share the date and time of the baby shower
Describe the activities planned for the event
Ask them to bring a small gift if possible
Mention any special dress code

Submitted Answer

Words120|Paragraphs8
English:UK English
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Dear Joe,
I’m writing this letter to inform you of Tim’s baby shower. I’d be planning it
so
I would like to use this opportunity to invite you
for
this event.
The planned date and time is Saturday the 21st of April at 3pm. I know you are normally free on Saturdays, so I believe you should be able to make it happen.
The activities planned for the day
includes
, parents race, baby name guessing and card games.
I’d suggest you come with a gift if you can, doesn’t have to be an expensive one. Things like pampers and baby plastic toys should be fine.
Finally, the dress code is smart causal.
Best Regards,
Frank

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